Score: 5

"Not as good as the first..."

submission: Clayland - Adventures 2

date: August 30, 2007

This one wasn't really a big improvment from the first one in the series, and it still seems like you held your nose in this one. But the biggest problem is that the plot wasn't very interesting and it didn't really deliver anything new or different. Seems like you tried harder, but keep those suggestions in mind, and you'll probably do better.

Score: 3

"Meh, could've been better.."

submission: Clayland - Stranded

date: August 30, 2007

It was okay, the animation was smooth and the concept was good, but there were a few issues that really screwed the movie up. You did the annoying voice that was much hated by many of your critics, and the cheese jokes are old and unfunny. Again, the humor issues hindered this movie from being very good, but better luck next time.

Score: 5

"Probably one of your better works I've seen..."

submission: Adventures in ClayLand

date: July 21, 2007

Well I must say that I thought this wasn't going to be good because of the very short production time but I was wrong. You're actually starting to show improvement. It has a plot which is a good start, but it still wasn't very funny (But I almost chuckled when they checked newgrounds for reviews) and I didn't really think the voices were all that great. This has some potential, but it was still not the best it could possibly be due to the lack of humor. Oh well, maybe the sequel will be better.